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Smoogie
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 Posted - 2014/02/08 : 21:22:09
I have been messing around making a few tunes lately, I have sent some submissions off to the PPF album but this tune WAS NOT sent off and has never been heard by many people before
Bit of Freeform with hard kicks and a female vocal I chored from somewhere
I have some other demos to put up but 4 have been sent off to Ken Masters so will not be uploaded until a later date
Peace
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latininxtc
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 Posted - 2014/02/08 : 21:55:23
I don't know what the hell that was, but it wasn't freeform.
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AceofSpades_Lorenzo
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 21:58:22
there's like no structure & the synths seem to not go together well :xxxxx
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Smoogie
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 22:02:09
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Originally posted by latininxtc:
I don't know what the hell that was, but it wasn't freeform.
Old Skool Freeform
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Smoogie
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 22:03:20
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Originally posted by AceofSpades_Lorenzo:
there's like no structure & the synths seem to not go together well :xxxxx
Its not a Raverbaby tune
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AceofSpades_Lorenzo
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 22:14:57
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Originally posted by Smoogie:
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Originally posted by AceofSpades_Lorenzo:
there's like no structure & the synths seem to not go together well :xxxxx
Its not a Raverbaby tune
Its not in key either! :D
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Smoogie
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 22:16:42
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Originally posted by AceofSpades_Lorenzo:
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Originally posted by Smoogie:
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Originally posted by AceofSpades_Lorenzo:
there's like no structure & the synths seem to not go together well :xxxxx
Its not a Raverbaby tune
Its not in key either! :D
Is it supposed to be?
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AceofSpades_Lorenzo
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 22:17:54
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Originally posted by Smoogie:
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Originally posted by AceofSpades_Lorenzo:
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Originally posted by Smoogie:
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Originally posted by AceofSpades_Lorenzo:
there's like no structure & the synths seem to not go together well :xxxxx
Its not a Raverbaby tune
Its not in key either! :D
Is it supposed to be?
yeah, that's what makes music, music. otherwise it's just random sounds put together. :D
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latininxtc
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 22:21:14
That's pretty much all it is, a bunch of random stuff put together. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but it actually has to sound good. This does not.
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Smoogie
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 22:44:05
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Originally posted by latininxtc:
That's pretty much all it is, a bunch of random stuff put together. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but it actually has to sound good. This does not.
Sounds fine to me
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The Dopeman
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 23:20:33
wtf did i just listen to??
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Smoogie
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Posted - 2014/02/08 : 23:35:43
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wtf did i just listen to??
Hardcore Freeform
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latininxtc
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Posted - 2014/02/09 : 00:09:26
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Originally posted by latininxtc:
That's pretty much all it is, a bunch of random stuff put together. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but it actually has to sound good. This does not.
Sounds fine to me
Well to you that's probably all you care about. For you, you just created a masterpiece.
But since you posted it on here for the rest of us to listen to, we're going to have opinions, and right now you are 0-3 as far as fans of the track.
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Shades
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Posted - 2014/02/09 : 00:16:16
hmmm no easy way to put this but...
freeform normally has an acid line somewhere.....
there is no percussion
there is no bassline
the vocal is out of key
if you enjoy it, dont let others put you off, but a little advice
really listen intently to a tune you really like & try to emulate it, do it bar by bar & down to last high hat, you'll be amazed just how much goes into making a good tune :)
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Josephson_Junction
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Posted - 2014/02/09 : 00:26:50
Smoogie, your heart may be in the right place, but if you're going to take production (or any creative activity) seriously you should be willing to listen to what others say, as well as ask questions. Ignoring their feedback simply because it "sounds fine" to you will get you absolutely nowhere.
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2014/02/09 : 00:52:20
I notice an improvement over previous works. Keep at it Smoogie.
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