Revs
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Austria
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Joined: Oct, 2008
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 Posted - 2009/10/29 : 23:17:01
Yeah I listen to House (actually I switched back to House) and I also produce it, and I have to say it's not bad, but there are some things … first of all this doesn't really sound like proper House, it's a bit too fast, and has not really a melody. You need an intro, breakdown, mainpart, breakdown, mainpart, outro :) Try to put the mainparts 'out' of the whole track, what I want to say is, you gotta notice it compared to the rest. Listen to some House/Electro House and see how the tracks are build etc. If you want to make an Electro House Track, don't use Donks. If you wanna make normal House, use Donks or other, normal basslines.
Also, the hi-hats are too fast. Maybe that's what makes it sounds so fast. Make it sound a bit slower :)
I hope this helped, good luck!
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