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icex
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 Posted - 2005/09/01 : 03:38:58
let me know what you think its called magical and is in the beatz section...
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/09/01 : 16:06:27
imo,the melody you introduce in the first break is too loud and severe for my liking.
If it was mellow it'd create a much better atmosphere and you could harden it up
when the beat kicks back in, or something.
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thefool
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Posted - 2005/09/01 : 17:23:40
I agree with ionosphere, i would have a more silent/slower start. However the rest of the track is quite nice!
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/09/01 : 17:47:41
quite nice really I actually quite like the first melody claps a bit quiet.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/09/01 : 18:34:18
i was having problems a few problems mixing down. made it a week ago but wasnt sure about it so i wanted the public to hear it.
how is the kick? the bass glitchs a bit.
basically this was a first draft and was wondering if i should redo it or scrap it?
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/09/02 : 04:08:20
hapbe, nice melodies, definately liking this style of urs mate.
and that first synth perhaps could be toned down a bit as Ionosphere was sayin.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/09/04 : 23:31:36
Kick sounds fine mate don't scrap the track its good
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