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Hazard303
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United States
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 Posted - 2015/03/10 : 22:01:43
https://soundcloud.com/hazard303/s3rl-pretty-rave-girl-waffle-hazard-2015-revise
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versia
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Australia
180 posts
Joined: Oct, 2013
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Posted - 2015/03/10 : 23:01:08
streight up shit pipe
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silver
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Japan
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Joined: Feb, 2001
894 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2015/03/11 : 02:59:21
I like the start but you're used the wrong sort of kick IMO, there are alot of frequency overlaps in the tune so much so that in sections you can't hear the kick anymore when alot of elements are playing.
If you played this on a large sound system it would sound really muddy. Tighten the kick up and EQ the track / sound elements a little more and you'll have a good remix.
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Hazard303
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United States
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Posted - 2015/03/11 : 15:46:11
quote:
Originally posted by silver:
I like the start but you're used the wrong sort of kick IMO, there are alot of frequency overlaps in the tune so much so that in sections you can't hear the kick anymore when alot of elements are playing.
If you played this on a large sound system it would sound really muddy. Tighten the kick up and EQ the track / sound elements a little more and you'll have a good remix.
appreciate the feedback
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Hazard303
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Posted - 2015/03/11 : 15:47:31
quote:
Originally posted by versia:
streight up shit pipe
is this a negative reference?
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Bad Corey
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United States
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Joined: Dec, 2011
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Posted - 2015/03/11 : 16:22:54
There's some good ideas here but the song layout needs a good amount of work. The ratio of downtime to full energy in this is like 70% to 30%. I would recommend starting a 4/4 kick around 0:46. As it stands, this intro is far too long. Also flesh out the section at 1:26 a bit more, because by the time it gets moving, it's already back to a breakdown. You don't hit anything resembling a chorus till about 3:30 in, by that time everyone on the floor is going to be bored. Pretty much only freeform can get away with that. Feels like the track never really gets where it's going.
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Edited by - Bad Corey on 2015/03/11 16:23:49 |
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