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tonyg123
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 Posted - 2012/03/11 : 00:07:04
http://soundcloud.com/tony-tony-g-gilmour/tony-g-serious-shit
New track from me, let me know what use think, feedback would be appriciated cheers :D
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JwH
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Posted - 2012/03/11 : 01:07:07
Your bass is far to weak. It sounds as if your lead is panned to the left a little in the mid section.
You should pan your percussion and give space for your synths to breathe.
Good effort :)
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tonyg123
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Posted - 2012/03/11 : 01:27:12
kool, how do u think i could make my bass stronger?? yeh my lead is panned out, tryed to make it sound wider glad it worked haha will fix that bud, cheers for the feedback mate appriciated!!!!
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Karthy
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Posted - 2012/03/11 : 13:26:05
Usually... the easiest way to make a bass stronger is by layering it, put several different basses over the top of each other, all playing at the same time. Then eq them so they don't eat each other.
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tonyg123
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Posted - 2012/03/11 : 22:47:10
kool thanks, r u meanin eq each bass seperatly?? I used 2 basses is that enough?? both were made my self 1 with v-station the other with sylenth, the 1 with sylenth is the with the rolling effect, do u think the sounds themselves arnt big enough(i.e sumthing i could do within the synithezer to make it more dominant?) Thank u for replying really appriciate it, i dont have that many freinds who play the decks never mind producing to get feedback so anything use tell me is a great help, thanks again :D
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Phobz
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Posted - 2012/03/18 : 10:48:13
Yeah it's all sounding good but as most said the bass needs a bit more humf. In the intro it sounds like your kick as a bit too much high end, can hear it - tinny background sound. Unless that's just compression when it's been put on soundcloud. Love the melody too, nice and fast :)
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tonyg123
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Posted - 2012/03/18 : 17:48:01
It probaly will have phobz il have a listen again Ive definatly had it in other tracks ive done, im jus startin to learn bout EQ and using fruity free filter to filter out unwanted frequencies. How do u get around that it?? Its all a bit much for my peanut of a brain but like anythin itll only get easier, Gotta get that bass sorted aswell. thanks for replyin :)
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Phobz
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Posted - 2012/03/18 : 20:01:30
It's nothing major mate as you can only hear it in the first 8 bar section then it's drowned out but it may cause a little interference with other sounds if it is there I would of thought - plus i'm wearing headphones (which might make it easier for me to hear). Even if you just clipped the kick, load it up into a sound editor and give it a little envelope fade out at the end section it would probably fix it. If you send your kick to a free fx channel and use fruity parametric eq just bring down the most right hand side sliders until you hear the difference. That should do it.
http://howtomakeelectronicmusic.com/simple-eq-tip-to-make-your-drums-sound-better this may help mate.
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tonyg123
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Posted - 2012/03/26 : 20:47:15
cheerz phobz big help :) dun that and got it re posted with sum other alterations aswell
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