Shades
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2012/02/11 : 18:28:45
ok, had a quick listen, on the second part of the breakdown you need to build it up till it all kicks in, booms, crashes, claps, snare fills, whatever floats you're boat, it's a bit same old.. with just the lead alone, the bass could use some processing, like a bitcrusher or some distort, or both, the kick needs some top end slap.
A little too much distort on the the pads imho & they are too loud.
you're perc's need more fills definitely & some variation throughout the tune all round will encourage listeners.
just my opinion dont take it to heart, all takes time to perfect.
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