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jay g
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 Posted - 2011/11/26 : 10:17:35
this is a preview of a track im still working on my first try at hardcore coz i usually do hardstyle ive cut it short so people cant rip it off youtube if you know what i mean..... what you think
http://youtu.be/Ve9P1q9GJ3g
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DJ John Jarvis
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Posted - 2011/11/26 : 15:49:58
I like the main melody. The bass seems to be out of tune with the rest of the song though. The bassline should match the low notes in your melody. For the breakdown maybe you should use a softer sweeping pad/string sound and make some chords instead of just using one note. Just listen to other artists breakdowns to see what I mean. The song is also a bit empty so could have some stuff added to fill it out but I know it's still in progress. Despite that the melody is good.
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jay g
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Posted - 2011/11/26 : 20:26:52
thanks 4 reply m8 means alot will work on what u said
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jay g
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Posted - 2011/11/26 : 20:33:09
if u use fl i can post u the project an u can collab an give me your taste on the tune
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DJ John Jarvis
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Posted - 2011/11/26 : 22:55:39
Yea I'm up for a collab. I use FL and I'm happy to see what I can do to improve it. My email is [email protected]
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jay g
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Posted - 2011/11/27 : 10:58:37
sent it mate
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Karthy
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Posted - 2011/11/27 : 13:11:48
Intro's a bit boring, could do with a bit more in there to make it more interesting, and the lead is a little weak, and yeah while the bass is good, it needs a bit more doing to it to make it fit in, good for a first try though :)
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Waglas
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Posted - 2011/11/27 : 21:15:37
Try to use equalizers. The sound that begins at 0:42 takes too much space. Cut some frequencies so it will fit better into the track.
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