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Kayin
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United States
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 Posted - 2011/09/11 : 06:32:57
Hey everyone,
Im still practicing making Happy Hardcore and remixing and I finally finished a track that I personally like and would let others listen to it. Anyway, what I'm asking is if you wouldn't mind taking a listen to this and tell me what you think of it. With this song, I tried to do something energetic and aggressive, but whether I was able to accomplish this or not is up to you.
Soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/dj-kayinkento/kayinkento-with-a-vengence
Mediafire:http://www.mediafire.com/?6zz2d566u2uumv2
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v-act
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Posted - 2011/09/11 : 15:27:49
Energic: Yes
Aggressive: No. (I prefer the more uplifting stuff, though so this is a plus!)
I love this stuff, even though i think the kick was a bit loud, but it's punchy and a generally really good kick.
I'm not really a fan of a bass that is that long, it rolls into the kick, which sounds weird. My advice is that you should make it a bit shorter. Also try layering different waveforms on top of eachother, like saw + square, that sounds wicked!
Overall, i think this tune has potential to be a real slammer! Keep it up, mate and you will do great!
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Kayin
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Posted - 2011/09/13 : 04:37:06
For a sec, it took me a while to realize what you were talking about with the bass, but my brain finally turned on and I understood what you're talking about.
Anyway, I tried out the things you suggested, so here's the link:
http://www.mediafire.com/?07n4g5kntzllr07
Thanks again for the feedback!
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Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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v-act
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Posted - 2011/09/13 : 14:37:48
Sounds a lot better now, imo! The shortened bass makes it a bit more bouncy!
"For a sec, it took me a while to realize what you were talking about with the bass, but my brain finally turned on and I understood what you're talking about."
That may have been me, english isn't my first language :D
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Kayin
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Posted - 2011/09/15 : 00:52:12
Yeah I noticed that bounce after I adjusted it. Thanks for the advice, sounds better than ever. ^_^
And no you made sense the first time, I just had to realise what you were talking about when you said, "bass" and "it rolls into the kick."
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Cheeky banter between Jimmy and the lady behind the plexiglass:
Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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Rookie1992
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Posted - 2011/09/18 : 17:27:37
sounds really good if you was asking for opinions, up and coming stuff really liked it could here this kicking out from my stereo as we speak, keep up the good work.
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Kayin
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Posted - 2011/10/04 : 01:45:59
Thanks for the opinion Rookie ^_^ I'm always looking to hear what people think of it.
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Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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