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H3RO
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United States
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 Posted - 2011/03/06 : 18:05:39
Hey guys. I've been working on this track for a while now, and I've been really pushing myself, trying new things and such. Please let me know what you guys think! This is my first time using a vocal sample, so let me know what I can do better with it. Thanks in advance!
http://soundcloud.com/h3ro73/the-time-has-come
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2011/03/06 : 18:48:19
Try and "summarize" the main ideas of the track as it feels a bit long.The main riff is good but a bit too recurrent. You could also make variations so as not to make the track so repetitive since you're basically using the same bassline throughout. The vocal doesn't add that much from my point of view. The fact the words are whispered doesn't help.
I like the outro. :)
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H3RO
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Posted - 2011/03/07 : 02:32:30
Thank you very much! This is one of the few times I have gotten substantial feedback! I really, really appreciate it. The vocal is tricky. I wanted it originally to be in a really deep voice, but I don't like the sound of when I pitch it down, being that I don't have the voice I'd like, and I can't afford to have them done professionally. I would love to hear if you have any ideas as to what to do with it! Thanks again!!!
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