whispering Moderator
Finland
8,453 posts Joined: Nov, 2002
Posted - 2011/02/01 : 09:19:04
TBH, i think the melody is too fast. And it should have longer pauses in the middle. Now it starts right after the previous section, which loses the point of the originals melody. Other then that, sounds good.
Alert moderatorEdited by - whispering on 2011/02/01 09:22:26
Mortis Advanced Member
United Kingdom
7,493 posts Joined: May, 2004
341 hardcore releases
Posted - 2011/02/01 : 10:11:39
Ok, this is what I get from it:
Over all it needs work on the mixdown side of things, needs thickening up in almost every department.
Love the piano.
I'm not sure if that's the original melody or not (never seen the films) but the chord progression doesn't make sense, it seems to change where it shouldn't and doesn't where is should...if you know what I mean. I'm all for being different but it still has to make sense The more I listen to it the less I seem to be able to follow the track.
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Quicksilver Advanced Member
Sweden
2,545 posts Joined: Jul, 2007
Posted - 2011/02/01 : 11:18:09
It is the original melody and chord progression, yeah. I shall see if I can fiddle around with the melody to make it more trance-friendly. ;P But I don't think it's too fast? Also, what do you mean "longer pauses in the middle"? :D
whispering Moderator
Finland
8,453 posts Joined: Nov, 2002
Posted - 2011/02/01 : 12:23:48
quote:Originally posted by Quicksilver:
It is the original melody and chord progression, yeah. I shall see if I can fiddle around with the melody to make it more trance-friendly. ;P But I don't think it's too fast? Also, what do you mean "longer pauses in the middle"? :D
Hard to explane, but ill try :P
Tidi titti tidititti tiditi _short pause_ Tidi titti tidititti tiditi _short pause_ and so on....
1:21 short pause, 1:24 short pause. At least it sounds to me that they are separated somehow, where as your version sounds like theres no "gap" in there. It may be the speed of the melody is just making it sound like that though.
Alert moderatorEdited by - whispering on 2011/02/01 12:26:47
Quicksilver Advanced Member
Sweden
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Posted - 2011/02/01 : 15:24:36
It's actually based on this:
:) But I see what you mean! It is due to the speed cause there is a 1/4 pause there. Let me get on it though. :)
Alert moderatorEdited by - Quicksilver on 2011/02/01 15:28:15
whispering Moderator
Finland
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Posted - 2011/02/01 : 17:35:55
quote:Originally posted by Quicksilver:
:) But I see what you mean! It is due to the speed cause there is a 1/4 pause there. Let me get on it though. :)
Guess then its just the difficulty of covering a song to a different genre :p
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Posted - 2011/02/01 : 00:10:08
The more I listen to it the less I seem to be able to follow the track.
