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Quicksilver
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Posted - 2011/01/08 :  22:27:33  Show profile Send a private message  Visit Quicksilver's homepage
I posted this in the Tracks, mixes etc forum but realized that I should probably have posted it here instead. :p

I would say that this is my first, real proper attempt at a tune. I tried to make the tune match the progress of the game Portal (which it samples) meaning it starts soft and goes nuts in the end.

http://soundcloud.com/ruzlix/companion-cube

It's influenced by chiptunes (not too much, don't worry haters!) and has this electro-y part in the second part, then in the last part it goes nuts. :p

CONSTRUCTIVE feedback, please!


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Triquatra
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Posted - 2011/01/08 :  23:08:16  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit Triquatra's homepage
LOL! portal rocks.

your song is good also! gets a little wierd toward the middle and end :P


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Edited by - Triquatra on 2011/01/08 23:09:17
Quicksilver
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Posted - 2011/01/08 :  23:26:06  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit Quicksilver's homepage
Like I said... meant to mirror the game.

Was it good or bad that it got weird? :P


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Triquatra
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sorry, i didnt read anything you posted, i just saw the link and pressed it :P

i like that you mirrored the game in that way - though someone listening without that knowledge is gonna think "wth" ;)

i liked it, probably not dark and freeformy enough, but a bit of bouncey hardcore doesnt hurt, it was right on the cusp of being dark though eh?


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Quicksilver
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Haha!

I added a bit of a breakdown before the final part... Should help understand a bit. :)


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Huge updates have been done! :)

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Greeeat use of the samples towards the end, love it.

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Quicksilver
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Posted - 2011/01/11 :  23:24:15  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit Quicksilver's homepage
Haha, cheers mate! Glad you liked that part! :D

I have uploaded a roughly finished version now - it just needs a few tweaks. Not mastered though. I completely removed the trance synth part. :)


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