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Kayin
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United States
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 Posted - 2010/12/23 : 07:59:37
This is my attempt at making a happy hardcore track for the first time. I've done others, but I no longer count the songs I made using eJay House since the program is so bloody easy to use compared to FLStudio. Anyway, if you guys could give me some feedback, that'll be great.
P.S., hehe sorry, I kind of BS'd the song's structure so sorry if it doesn't sound 100% consistant. I just set myself on auto-pilot mode and ran with it.
http://www.mediafire.com/?6vrj930q7o55rje
Its an untitled track right now, I suck with names. For now, lets call it....happy-go-lucky >.>
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W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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v-act
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Sweden
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Posted - 2010/12/23 : 14:49:27
I liked it, it sounded very "old schoolish" but, yes, the structure isn't that great but this is your first song. :d
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Kayin
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Posted - 2010/12/24 : 01:59:02
Hehe thanks for the feedback v-act. What are your suggestions on me changing the structure a bit? Is it mainly the intro/outro or everything in between that needs fixing?
Also, can you think of a name for the song?
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Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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D-tor
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Posted - 2010/12/24 : 06:38:49
Maybe the artist should name the track himself. ;) New artists making Old School-sounding tracks is good!
Not bad! I like the breakdown. It does need structure touchups and facelifts here and there, and it could be a very decent track that I'd spin. ;) The part around 2:59 is a bit repetitive, I suggest getting insanely creative there.
Also, it is against the rules to have an image of any size in the signature. Friendly warning, but sucks, right?
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JayHH86
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Posted - 2010/12/24 : 08:03:53
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Originally posted by D-tor:
Also, it is against the rules to have an image of any size in the signature. Friendly warning, but sucks, right?
Someone should really tell Gisbo about this because his signature image takes up about eighteen pages.
As for the tune - I tried to download it a few days ago, but my internet rarely stays connected for longer than five minutes, so it failed. I'll try again now.
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Shades
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Posted - 2010/12/24 : 08:36:36
for a tune made in e-jay thats not bad at all, im quite suprized, but if your at all serious about music production, you'll need to learn to use a real sequencer
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Kayin
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Posted - 2010/12/24 : 09:01:56
Sorry about that. I made sure that sig was at least smaller than 400px, but I replaced it with British humor. Love that Jimmy Carr.
Anyway, thanks for the advice D-tor. I checked out what you said was a bit repetitive and I'll change that up a bit. By the time I fix it, I'll have a name for it.
@Shades_of_Grey: I made this song using FLStudio 7. Sorry it was pretty late at night so I didn't make too much sense. Like now. I gotta stop staying up till 4am x.x
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Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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Kayin
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Posted - 2011/01/01 : 17:55:52
So now that I finally got some time off from work, I was able to fix and finish this song up. Here's the link:
Celestial Sky
http://www.mediafire.com/?6vuk07pjall4k85
Yeah I know, bad name, eh? I was originally gonna go with "Happy Sky" but better not try to name it the same as IIDX Happy Sky.
Enjoy and hope you like it. ^_^
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Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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D-tor
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Posted - 2011/01/01 : 22:40:34
I really like it! Seems a lot cleaner. 
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Kayin
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Posted - 2011/01/03 : 18:59:21
Thanks a lot, I'm glad youlike it =D
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Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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