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cruelcore1
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 Posted - 2010/07/07 : 20:44:09
Hey!
I made another track, more traditional than other ones.
I'm waiting for your feedback!
SoundCloud link:
http://soundcloud.com/dj-cruelcore-neo/dj-cruelcore-neo-ravers-soul
YouTube link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmevcTX13oc
Free download site (or just go "Buy this track" on SoundCloud):
http://www.ftp-download.netne.net/
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DJ Jessie
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Posted - 2010/07/07 : 22:23:00
And feedback you shall have.
Its a very good track indeed. you did a real good job of keeping it not boring. Congrats.
The only thing I noticed (and it may be just me) is the twinkling piano is a wee bit too high. Bring it down a few keys or an octave.
4.5/5
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H3RO
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 04:11:51
This is awesome man!!! I have to agree the piano is a tad bit high and it may just be my dad's crappy computer speakers but I didn't notice a bottom end during the breakdown. Overall, it's a sick, sick track. Nice job!
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 04:16:30
the kick is the only part that ruins it for me. :(
other than that. its ight.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 09:45:18
quote:
Originally posted by DJ Jessie:
And feedback you shall have.
Its a very good track indeed. you did a real good job of keeping it not boring. Congrats.
The only thing I noticed (and it may be just me) is the twinkling piano is a wee bit too high. Bring it down a few keys or an octave.
4.5/5
well i tried 2 make it octave lower but it sounded bad. but thnx 4 ur feedback.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 09:46:18
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Originally posted by Lorenzo.Tweakn:
the kick is the only part that ruins it for me. :(
other than that. its ight.
do u think theres too much bass in the kick?
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DJseaking
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 10:16:38
Good track, nice sound round half way thru,
What did you use to make it, Midi?
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 10:20:39
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Originally posted by DJseaking:
Good track, nice sound round half way thru,
What did you use to make it, Midi?
no, i used my mind.
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Revs
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 11:51:27
Lijepa pijesma! :)
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 13:32:33
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Originally posted by DJ Revs:
Lijepa pijesma! :)
Hvala =)
Govoris hrvatski?
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Revs
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 14:45:17
da ;) imam te na faceu.. /revs1
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Mortis
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 15:01:48
I agree with Tweakn about the kick. I think it's a bit to muffled, I'd go for a bit of a punchier sharper kick.
About the piano, I don't think the notes are to high up the scale, I like them as they are. Maybe you could change either the piano to a bell type sound and lower the octave or lower the piano and octave and layer it with a bell sound and add a touch of delay to the bell. That way you'll have a nice thick piano but still retain the sparkly, plinky, dreamy sound.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 16:04:37
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Originally posted by DJ Revs:
da ;) imam te na faceu.. /revs1
o, super =).
samo sto ti ja nisam bas na faceu.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 16:05:58
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Originally posted by Mortis:
I agree with Tweakn about the kick. I think it's a bit to muffled, I'd go for a bit of a punchier sharper kick.
About the piano, I don't think the notes are to high up the scale, I like them as they are. Maybe you could change either the piano to a bell type sound and lower the octave or lower the piano and octave and layer it with a bell sound and add a touch of delay to the bell. That way you'll have a nice thick piano but still retain the sparkly, plinky, dreamy sound.
Yeah, i would like 2 get a bell-sounding piano x).maybe I should try out the piano VST which somes in FL.
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Mortis
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 16:08:22
The VST that comes in FL can't do a bell sound. If I remember rightly it's just basic piano and rhodes. I always used the M1 or Nexus plugins if I was using a bell sound. I think Sytrus has a few pre-sets.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/08 : 16:30:30
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Originally posted by Mortis:
The VST that comes in FL can't do a bell sound. If I remember rightly it's just basic piano and rhodes. I always used the M1 or Nexus plugins if I was using a bell sound. I think Sytrus has a few pre-sets.
Nexus, I have Nexus. Im uually using it 4 stuff i dont wanna bother myself with hehe.
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