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danielbreakz
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United Kingdom
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Joined: May, 2010
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 Posted - 2010/07/04 : 22:23:56
hi folks, this is our first hardcore tune, maybe needs a few slight adjustments here & there but basically all done. Its called PARADISE! feedback would be great.
thanks,
dan & mark.
http://soundcloud.com/danielbreakz
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Colombia
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Posted - 2010/07/05 : 01:55:08
I really liked it! pulled off the whole triplet thing nicely boys!
my only complaint is in the mastering department (I'm guessing you used a limiter by the looks of the waveform). The kick felt weak and the bass could use a little more tweaking.
still, overall a really good job. :)
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cruelcore1
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Croatia (Hrvatska)
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Posted - 2010/07/05 : 10:41:46
quote:
Originally posted by danielbreakz:
hi folks, this is our first hardcore tune, maybe needs a few slight adjustments here & there but basically all done. Its called PARADISE! feedback would be great.
thanks,
dan & mark.
http://soundcloud.com/danielbreakz
it's awesome! simply amazing for the beginning!
I think u should use (more) Reverb on the synth and delay it a lil. And there needs 2 be more bass in the bass. but it's nice =).
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danielbreakz
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2010/07/05 : 19:25:01
yeah, does need some sounds turned down a bit and im gonna get the kick and bass to come through more aswell,we havn't done a propper mixdown yet, its just a rough master for you to listern to.
thanks for the comments.
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