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cruelcore1
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 Posted - 2010/07/02 : 18:27:06
I have made a new remix, check it out! And download is free!
SounCloud link:
http://soundcloud.com/dj-cruelcore-neo/daz-sampson-teenage-life-dj-cruelcore-neo-remix
YouTube link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1BkWHoI98ek
FREE DOWNLOAD site (or just click "Buy this track" on SoundCloud):
http://www.ftp-download.netne.net/
This is my best song so far but I still need to get better. Please give me some advices/suggestions for my future songs and tell me what I could have improved in this one. It would mean much to me. Thanks!
And enjoy!
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Edited by - cruelcore1 on 2010/07/02 18:27:25 |
Vitalism
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 18:38:22
i'm actually impressed, much better than a lot of the stuff people post up here. not familiar with the original over here though.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:10:05
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i'm actually impressed, much better than a lot of the stuff people post up here. not familiar with the original over here though.
thanks, man =).
original is Hip-Hop, here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5TRIXN4ZzbA
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:10:18
GAY! I wanted to remix this!!!
Good work though man, needs a bit on work on getting the sounds right and stuff, but all the notes seem to be in the right place and key. Nice one!
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:12:39
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Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
GAY! I wanted to remix this!!!
Good work though man, needs a bit on work on getting the sounds right and stuff, but all the notes seem to be in the right place and key. Nice one!
thnx u 2 =)
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choonland
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:13:46
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Originally posted by Vitalism:
i'm actually impressed, much better than a lot of the stuff people post up here. not familiar with the original over here though.
I second that
we have a new kid on the block mates
great stuff cruelcore1!
I have nothing bad to say about it
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:16:44
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Originally posted by choonland:
I second that
we have a new kid on the block mates
great stuff cruelcore1!
I have nothing bad to say about it
thnx, mate.
and yeah, im new but tough x).
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:17:55
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Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
GAY! I wanted to remix this!!!
Good work though man, needs a bit on work on getting the sounds right and stuff, but all the notes seem to be in the right place and key. Nice one!
what sounds are you talkin about? I would really like 2 know what I should improve 4 future =).
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Edited by - cruelcore1 on 2010/07/02 19:25:23 |
cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:19:00
thnx, guys!
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Edited by - cruelcore1 on 2010/07/02 19:24:40 |
DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:25:35
I like the riff at 2:07. Really nice! I also like the "kiddie choir" thing but I feel it drags on for too long. needs a little more variation in my opinion. Also, the outro feels a bit rushed in terms of detail.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:32:06
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
I like the riff at 2:07. Really nice! I also like the "kiddie choir" thing but I feel it drags on for too long. needs a little more variation in my opinion. Also, the outro feels a bit rushed in terms of detail.
Well, in my opinion, I couldn't do many things and add many FX during the kiddie choir. I already added a Bellpad and piano chords+melody, and original already has some FX.
But I will practice a bit. Thnx =).
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 19:45:00
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
I like the riff at 2:07. Really nice! I also like the "kiddie choir" thing but I feel it drags on for too long. needs a little more variation in my opinion. Also, the outro feels a bit rushed in terms of detail.
they are actually dead fit sixth formers :]
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 20:23:48
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Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
I like the riff at 2:07. Really nice! I also like the "kiddie choir" thing but I feel it drags on for too long. needs a little more variation in my opinion. Also, the outro feels a bit rushed in terms of detail.
they are actually dead fit sixth formers :]
lol! just checked the link to the original.
Still, way too childish.
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 20:34:18
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
lol! just checked the link to the original.
Still, way too childish.
Hehe, it's a remix x). There's nothing I can do about it. Childish part is the chorus.
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 20:55:34
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Originally posted by cruelcore1:
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
lol! just checked the link to the original.
Still, way too childish.
Hehe, it's a remix x). There's nothing I can do about it. Childish part is the chorus.
Sorry, should've said "a bit childish" as I actually like the sound of it. ;)
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cruelcore1
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Posted - 2010/07/02 : 20:58:51
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
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Originally posted by cruelcore1:
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
lol! just checked the link to the original.
Still, way too childish.
Hehe, it's a remix x). There's nothing I can do about it. Childish part is the chorus.
Sorry, should've said "a bit childish" as I actually like the sound of it. ;)
lol, ok, thnx x).
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