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Uspmannen
Starting Member
Sweden
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Joined: May, 2010
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 Posted - 2010/05/11 : 03:27:34
Hi! I'm new here! I just made my first UK HC tune with FL , feel free to give feedback!
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choonland
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Colombia
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Joined: Dec, 2007
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Posted - 2010/05/11 : 05:17:10
Hi mate welcome to the forums!
is a good track for a fisrt one. I think you need to develope the main melody, it feels to me like an intro o verse melody, you need a "chorus melody" to really take off, if that makes any sense
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Uspmannen
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Sweden
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Posted - 2010/05/11 : 15:27:10
It makes a lot of sense!
Thanks man for the advice!
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