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shooter19
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 Posted - 2010/05/07 : 19:23:35
Link here:
http://soundcloud.com/camxboxlive/shooter-dreaming-to-be-underground
Please leave pros and cons of the track so I can improve it :D
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acidfluxxbass
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 Posted - 2010/05/07 : 20:17:49
what initially strikes me is the detune on the lead. Doesnt quite fit. Would add more, but I need to go to swimming.
Hope this helps, nonetheless!
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2010/05/07 : 20:35:16
Well it's a fantastic track mate but there is some issues. The lead is deffo a bit too detuned IMO, gotta agree with ACID there. The kick isn't fantastic it doesn't really punch through. The bass seems to be phasing too. Get the issues sorted and you'll have a great track here mate.
Following you on Soundcloud now man. :)
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shooter19
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Posted - 2010/05/07 : 21:08:53
Yeah I thought the lead was soundin detuned on the build up, I shall sort it!
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shooter19
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Posted - 2010/05/10 : 17:36:58
bump
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