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DJ Complx
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 Posted - 2009/12/02 : 15:13:45
Hey guys,
Here is another song that I have been working on.
Let me know what you guys think of it as well as what could be improved!
Its edited down, not the full song.
Thanks again guys!!
LINK:
http://www.speedyshare.com/files/19583329/_st_Track.wav
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DJ Complx
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Posted - 2009/12/02 : 22:47:34
bump
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2009/12/02 : 22:59:07
link doesnt work for me...
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DJ Complx
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Posted - 2009/12/03 : 00:49:43
just checked it, it works for me
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2009/12/03 : 01:02:08
i clicked on it to download n it said something bout network problems. use zippyshare.com
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DJ Complx
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Posted - 2009/12/03 : 01:36:15
try this
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=S44FTRMK
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näkkk
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Posted - 2009/12/03 : 09:14:19
The chord progression is as cheesy as it gets, but you've made an okay melody out of it, the harmony stuff that starts at 1:42 is pretty cool. You could probably throw some delay or reverb on that lead though, and make the kick a little more powerful. And what happens at 0:47, is it supposed to be like that, or did you just cut the breakdown short for clipping purposes? If the latter is the case, you should try to avoid that, sounds better if it's a continuous clip ;)
Overall it's a decent track, but could use some work on the sounds. As I'm no expert on that myself, I can't give much advice on the subject. You've also added a few nice details like reverse kick.
How long have you been producing?
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DJ Complx
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 Posted - 2009/12/03 : 09:55:30
the whole track is about 6 min long, didnt want to upload the whole thing, so i cut out some of it. I have been producing for about 6-7 months now, I know i still have a long way to go b4 i really get any where, that track is probably the 7th one i have worked on and the 3rd one i have actually gotten to a "finished" state. That one still needs a lot of work and im very aware that its super  cheesy
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DaMann
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Posted - 2009/12/06 : 01:54:01
The lead sound overpowers the bassline the intro. When it comes to the chorus the melody sounds good, but you need delay or reverb on it, especially if there are going to be pauses in the melody. Also it sounds like you haven't found the detune knob on that synth you're using for the lead :) Sounds very analog and basic. I can help you clean up the song technically too, but I rather not do it in a post, I'll send you a private message with my MSN.
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