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näkkk
Advanced Member
Norway
755 posts
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 Posted - 2009/10/12 : 02:23:03
Yes, yes, it's that time again!
This time I decided to make a remix of an old favourite of mine, the music from the Big Blue course in F-Zero for the SNES!
The main melody part is 40 bars, which is probably a bit of an overkill for hardcore, but it was fun making it!
http://www.4shared.com/file/140203906/fe1b2af6/nkkenboro_-_into_the_big_blue.html
Tell me what I did wrong, and you will have increased luck with women the following 14 days! ;)
Constructive criticism only please, no single word posts like "shit". I already know that, and telling me won't do any good
Thanks in advance!
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Edited by - näkkk on 2009/10/12 02:23:30 |
rosin007
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Norway
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Posted - 2009/10/17 : 12:21:34
Hm.. This was pretty good, just one question, where is the kick?
Edit: I can hear it, but it doesn't do nothing.
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Edited by - rosin007 on 2009/10/17 12:23:25 |
Quicksilver
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Sweden
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Posted - 2009/10/17 : 12:42:05
The tune has potential, but it has a really, really weak kick. Beef it up a bit!
@ 5:41ish there's a nice kick.
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Edited by - Quicksilver on 2009/10/17 12:43:57 |
Rayovac
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United States
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Posted - 2009/10/17 : 15:52:30
I must reiterate, the kick is way too weak. It sounds like it wants to hold up the rest of the song but fails miserably, you know what I mean? I'm also not digging that piano. It sounds way too much like the one in the MS GS Wavetable Synth that comes with every copy of Windows.
Lots of potential though.
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näkkk
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Norway
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Posted - 2009/10/18 : 19:40:08
Thanks for the feedback ;D I'll work on the kick once I've got a computer I can work on, my old one died a few days back >_> I'll also try out some other piano sounds ^^
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