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Yateszy
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 Posted - 2009/09/04 : 21:52:38
Just thought I would share my remix of Hot & Cold, its old but it's easy to mix so what do you think? I know the piano is bland, its just fruity keys :P, and the synth isnt up to much, but what about the rest?
Only got youtube link, and I know it's quiet, I couldn't get it to master.
Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v9rcwtfJv4A
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/09/05 : 00:54:27
having listened to it a couple of times, i have found a couple of critisisms you'd probably appreciated. when the main melody comes in, the track loses some of its energy and sounds somewhat more mellow than the buildup with the piano. also, the tunes struggles to flow so well with such a harsh bassline and stuttered parts of the sample. im also not too keen on the paino sound used, or the synth that follow the bassline with the higher octave. i listened to intersekt immediately after the remix, and it seemed allot more fuller and better mastered. have you put the hot n cold remix through T-Racks yet? other than that its still a nice track. (Y)
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Shades
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Posted - 2009/09/05 : 01:47:44
the vocal is slightly out of time mate, you can hear it's too fast @ 1:28, chord the piano to phatten it up, eq off the bottom end & boost the highs 
same goes for the lead, you need to layer it, by the sounds of the automation you know what your doing, thats all good, so why post when you know theres issues with the piano & lead?
the stuttering on the vox is excellent 
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Yateszy
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Posted - 2009/09/05 : 11:59:07
Thanks both, firstly I haven't mastered because there was a problem with FL Studio and for some reason it wont work using the beta 5.
I will try and fix the vocal which is just out of time thanks for that.
I will sort out the piano and synth, I just didn't have any plugins installed so I just used basic sounds.
I've also noticed it does lose energy after the buildup, trying to work out how I can sort that.
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