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näkkk
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 Posted - 2009/06/03 : 17:26:34
First dnb track I've made ;P
Pretty different from making hardcore, but I enjoyed it ^^
As I've never done this before I have no clue how to make the drum patterns, but I didn't wanna use the amen, so I chose a simple 2-step pattern with open hats and slight variations now and then
Since it's my first dnb track I would very much appreciate some feedback from the junglists, if we have any ;D
It's pretty short, but DJ friendly if anyone wants to throw it in a mix, and of course, 320kbps ;p
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6089224508899a3d/
I love you
-näkk
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2009/06/03 : 18:08:24
not bad at all. not too far from the DnB I've heard. somethings I'd improve though:
Synths are a bit too dry. some fx like reverb or delay would add more spice.
Also, I'd try and push the arrangement to at least 5 minutes.
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näkkk
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Posted - 2009/06/03 : 19:56:33
Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it ;)
I was thinking of throwing in some reverb actually, but left it out at the time ;p I'll throw some on and hopefully it will sound a bit better ^^
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HardcoreHarryUK
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Posted - 2009/06/04 : 14:37:11
i like it.. you certinaly struttered it like a dnb tune!!
maybe **** around with the sound more as their a little 'standard sounding'
not rough enough!!
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Meathead
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Posted - 2009/06/04 : 17:46:33
First things first, dont use zshare, its awful for previewing clips.
I hate this style of D&B so i cant really say too much about it. I think it would benefit a more complex drum pattern though. The bass synth im not keen on tbh mate. Sounds like your going for that rough, griity, phasing bass but it hasnt come of quite right. The overall production needs work as well as making the track a bit more interesting, it gets very bland (but then that could also be down to my hatred of Jump Up D&B). Keep at it though mate, its nice to see people trying different things.
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näkkk
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Posted - 2009/06/04 : 18:48:40
Thanks for the feedback, it's my first attempt at drum n bass, so don't really know what I'm doing ^^
Made a new version with a tiny bit more variation on the drum patterns, adjusted some levels and added reverb/delay :>
Oh, and I registered for 4shared as that's what most people seem to be using :P
Here's what it sounds like now, which isn't that much different :P
CLICK MEH
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