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Psaiber
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United States
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 Posted - 2002/06/03 : 08:58:47
I just finished my new track and would love some feedback. You can find it here.
http://www.curetheboredom.com/mystuff
Psaiber - You're Not Alone (Happycore Remix)
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DJ Pathfinder
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Netherlands
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Posted - 2002/06/03 : 09:29:05
not bad but you must make it longer and more variation in the track.
use some more sounds and fx but it have potential.
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o0sameyeam0o
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United States
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Posted - 2002/06/03 : 12:58:06
^^ i agree, its a wicked trak, but experiment more, do stuff never done b4
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silver
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Japan
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Posted - 2002/06/03 : 20:45:25
Very good... impressive actually... I am sure your future work will be even more excellent... send me a few finished ones for possible release on MasterWax :)
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o0sameyeam0o
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Posted - 2002/06/03 : 20:53:57
^^^ i think sumone just creamed their pants
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djyogi
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Australia
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Posted - 2002/06/04 : 03:13:22
man thats a decent track if that is your first go, what gear u use to create it ???
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Psaiber
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United States
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Posted - 2002/06/04 : 08:41:22
Hardware: Roland XP-30, JP8080
Software: Recylce, Reason, Soundforge (lots of plugins), Cubase (lots of plugins)
Thanks for the feedback everyone! :)
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Love Monkey
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2002/06/04 : 13:55:40
Its a good track but in my (humble) opinion i think you need to sort the voval out. Far too squeaky for my liking.
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xxhappyxx
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2002/06/06 : 11:29:18
yeah i really like it! but i agree with pathfinder, u cud do alot more with it, then it cud b gr8! :)
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Brian K
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Posted - 2002/06/06 : 20:10:35
i like how at 2:50 it sounds like it goes to a completely different track, stretch this part out and you could have some serious stomping =) the two vocal bits i feel are too close together, put some more space between 1:00 to 1:30. i like the echo effects on the vocal =)
overal sounds ace, i would make some fine tune ups here and there but then again, it's you're piece so you may like it just the way it is =)
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