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tru bass
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2007/08/13 : 20:09:29
i cant explain what genre it is but ive made a song!! (my second ever :)) and ive decided to show it off. if you like bass you should like it, btw excuse the flow i put it together in about an hour or so.
hope you like it!
http://www.4shared.com/file/21972264/d83d7c1e/experiment_-_tru_bass.html
please leave comments.. :-)
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/08/13 : 22:02:29
reviewing as i'm listening
bass is weak
no build up to lead
not liking the lead sounds you're using at all, they sound too much like bare presets
really muddy mixdown
no flow into break section (or prominent enough snares)
or the second break section
all in all, just left me feeling bored.
Sorry, but it's just not all that great. Nice effort, but lacks that "something special" that gets me into a tune.
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novaboy
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Posted - 2007/08/14 : 08:11:44
well here i go, im honest when it comes to track reviews..
the bass sounds 'nooby'
i dont think it was on scale, not even a scale much for the genre
didnt have a buildup really, and it built too quick
kick sounded a little presety
the lead after the kick was terrible im sorry ..
the breakdown was sloppy and progressed with 4 measures instead of 8 which is what it really should be..
and nothing changed when the breakdown finished, just a kick and percussion came in.
probably half as long as it should of been.
overall the engineering was terrible, same with the mixdown..
im really sorry if im being mean or rude, i just like to tell people their mistakes..
sorry
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