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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2007/02/12 : 16:42:51
Right I quite like it but here is some pointers.
There is a nasty high frequency on the reverb of something in the percussion.
I think the sound you introduce at 00:29 is a bit dull. Try using a more interesting sound.
Agree with mortis on the piano it's not a great sound.
The bass is either too quiet, not filling out the lower frequencies enough or a bit of both... Fixing this will make it sound allot less empty.
How about some nice rushy pads in there too to fill it out a bit more.
The “take control” sample needs to be EQ’ed higher as it’s really dull and un-clear ATM.
Not too sure the kick really works.
A decent track so far though mate.
… & Please don't speed it up it sounds fine at that speed :) Like you say it's not hardcore.
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warped_candykid
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Posted - 2007/02/12 : 19:27:03
I liked it, but like everyone else has said, needs some reconstructive work along the bass line and the piano, i dunno, sounds dull, pitch it up or make it stand out some, a piano can carry a tune pretty far. The speed is fine since you're using it for a club/house atmosphere. You got some skills, just need to keep working at it, I make some music too and it is difficult, keep practicing.
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roundhead711
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 Posted - 2007/02/12 : 23:03:56
I dont know a thing about producing but do know if sumthing i hear is gud!
It's gud enuf and u have skills but duz need more work and needs to have more bass in the kicks and is slightly boring but i dnt really like house and i liked it..
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roundhead711
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Posted - 2007/02/12 : 23:04:59
Can i ask wot u used to make it?
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