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Olly Dee
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Mar, 2006
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 Posted - 2006/04/10 : 00:34:11
Hey people!
Heres some freeform ive been working on today and i had a lot of fun making it. I could really do with some feedback on this track. Im not entirely sure what kind of direction to take it next, any suggestions?
http://s1.upload.sc/request/9e5a3a98c37791e7a296d5adc628029a
Not sure if this is the right place to post......talent showcase please!
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Silent Witness
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Nov, 2005
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 15:25:55
Watch out for this guy, Olly Dee - Hold Back out on Directive very soon!
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Olly Dee
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 16:38:36
You knows it
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GaryMaguireXL
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Ireland
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Joined: Apr, 2004
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Posted - 2006/04/11 : 10:32:23
I would take more of the bottom end out of that stab thats going through the track.
Like the acid line but the track seems to go nowhere TBH.
Maybe ease back some on the use of the Sample "The Twilight Zone"
Still needs a bit more work.
Keep at it
XL
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Olly Dee
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Posted - 2006/04/11 : 15:18:08
Yeah, i kinda hit a creative brick wall at the end of this tune, hopefully ill get some inspiration from somewhere and think of a way to finish it up proper. It blatantly needs some kind of melody that can float in and out of the track and kinda give it a direction.....bah.
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