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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Australia
163 posts
Joined: Jun, 2005
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 Posted - 2005/10/10 : 16:52:25
okay so this song has been in production less than 24 hours so theres still a LOT to be done timestretching, pitch, kicks, bass, etc etc etc too much to name... id just like to you know what you think coz personally i think the tuen is catchy... but i could just think that coz its mine 
Anyway if your going to listen make sure you listen at LEAST up until 35 seconds into it... thats where it really starts to pick up.
same goes as always - i love criticism so hit me with it just remember this song was STARTED about 16 hours ago so just keep in mind i KNOW theres still a lot to do... nevertheless give me your opinion!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=393322
P.S those of you following the progress of across the sky - i havent given up on it i just cant find a piano Vsti and im waiting on a new timestretching program... anyone who could help me with these i would also love to hear from!
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/10/10 : 17:42:17
Quirky key structure, takes a bit of getting used to, imo some sort of pads would help,
but yeh, it's different, good different rather than WTF is that? different.
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Roberticus
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Finland
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Joined: Dec, 2004
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Posted - 2005/10/10 : 17:43:53
quite good, but I'd say change the bass-sound (it does not really fit in, or maybe needs a slight adjust). And the vocal part, could you make some effect on the voice? (like adding echo or something like that to change it, sounds abit dull).
about that timestretching, I know a program where one can timestretch (but haven't used it myself..).
That program is Goldwave. http://www.goldwave.com/
It is free too 
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eLASTIC
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Australia
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Joined: Mar, 2005
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Posted - 2005/10/13 : 23:12:31
Must say i dont like the tune......but it pieces together well and like iono said.....pads n FX could really fill it up.
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