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dj bonzo
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Mar, 2005
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 Posted - 2005/03/29 : 15:31:56
Hello there i am new here, not sure if this is the right forum.
I have made my first two hardcore tunes and was wondering if anyone could possibly give me some feedback. Good or bad feedback appreacaited.
Lied to (hardcore mix)
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Link below.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/djbonzomusic.htm
Thanks in advance
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urban atmosphere
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/03/30 : 15:04:03
an alrite tune :) but id say tht u could probably put a better more powerful synth in, not my type of hardcore style but keep it up
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SiG
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Germany
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Joined: Apr, 2005
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Posted - 2005/04/03 : 22:49:12
On Lied To, the main synth seems really loud. Also seems like you could use a stronger bassline in there (although maybe its just the poor compression quality, so I can't hear it?). I like your dnb break though :)
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icex
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United States
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Posted - 2005/04/04 : 02:22:21
LIED TO sounds awesome. what i dont like is the pads in the first breakdown, the breakdown synth work, the main riff, after that i couldnt listen to anymore.
hey the intro is really sick, love the vocal, love the lil 303 sounds, and the siren type thing in the intro. i say work from there and get rid of the old version.
are those your vocals or a rip from a song? keep it up i like your work.
check out my tunes on soundclick lemme know how i can make them better or what you think about them.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/clubstyleusamusic.htm
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eLASTIC
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Australia
637 posts
Joined: Mar, 2005
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Posted - 2005/04/08 : 10:57:44
nice mate, vocals are awesome, perhaps that synth is a bit piercing.
the dnb break is sweet but id personally like to see it take off from there with the lead again or another perhaps different synth.
nevertheless a cool track mate.
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dj bonzo
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/04/09 : 19:15:10
Thanks for the feedback guys.
Icex listend to your tunes, what are you using to produce?
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Sean Apollo
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United States
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Posted - 2005/04/09 : 20:48:52
I like the breakbeat part good stuff.
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