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xplizit
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Posted - 2005/02/05 : 15:35:57
ello peeps.
i've been working on this track over the last few days. it's my first attempt at making hardcore. been messing around with cubase on and off for about a year now. i'm aware it needs more work but would like to know if you think it's worth me carrying on with it.
thanks
http://www.subcon-fusion.com/tunes/ardcore-05.mp3 "I can say I'm unique, coz even when I shit, my splash in the toilet makes a breakbeat"
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xplizit
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Posted - 2005/02/08 : 17:37:17
"I can say I'm unique, coz even when I shit, my splash in the toilet makes a breakbeat"
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Chicken
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Posted - 2005/02/08 : 19:21:40
I like the tune, and I def think it's worth finishing, but eh.... ^^^ where the hell did that pic come from? lol
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Mattikake
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Posted - 2005/02/08 : 22:49:20
Xplizit?
Not the same "DJ Explicit" from Tidy.com? One who recently sent me a quality hardcore mix on cd?
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xplizit
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Posted - 2005/02/09 : 16:20:01
nah that isn't me
and thanks chicken ;)
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xplizit
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Posted - 2005/02/14 : 19:56:26
b u m p
any more feedback?
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/02/14 : 20:17:16
downloading...
listens.....
Sounds pretty good dude, kick is to loud tho. Keep working on it. Add some more energy to it, maybe some acid ;)
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xplizit
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Posted - 2005/02/14 : 21:17:42
cheers dude! some 303s are definitely in the pipeline :D
the kicks sound ok on my speakers but i'll keep that in mind coz my speakers are by no means great for reference.
do you think the intro needs more variation? i can't decide if it's ok or a bit long and boring...
thanks for the comments anyway. much appreciated
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Entity
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Posted - 2005/02/14 : 22:46:40
Truth be told, if I made that tune you'd have to scrape me off the ceiling. Keep working on it and send me a copy when you're done
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xplizit
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Posted - 2005/02/15 : 08:46:08
quote: Originally posted by Hujimafuja:
Truth be told, if I made that tune you'd have to scrape me off the ceiling.
what u mean? is that a good thing? :P
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TypeR
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Posted - 2005/02/23 : 06:44:59
if it were me making this track, after the first breakdown, it feels like it's leading up to a hard dark drum and bass midsection, that would be pretty tight, i was anticipating it to tell the truth, i may be the only one that feels that. the intro is a bit long, but an acid line would make that intro be smoother. other than that, sounds good.
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