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sweetlilylove
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 Posted - 2024/05/19 : 19:44:53
Just dropped a new track, let me know what you think! 
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Edited by - sweetlilylove on 2024/05/19 19:46:45 |
DJ_FunDaBounce
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 Posted - 2024/05/19 : 20:40:01
Though I would work on the production a bit more, I like the vox and the track in general. It has good ideas! :)
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sweetlilylove
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Posted - 2024/05/20 : 00:09:22
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
Though I would work on the production a bit more, I like the vox and the track in general. It has good ideas! :)
Thanks, yeah I'm getting it worked on. Production is hard. 
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sweetlilylove
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Posted - 2024/05/20 : 20:26:44
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Originally posted by sweetlilylove:
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Originally posted by DJ_FunDaBounce:
Though I would work on the production a bit more, I like the vox and the track in general. It has good ideas! :)
Thanks, yeah I'm getting it worked on. Production is hard.
I made some fixes :)
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2024/05/20 : 21:53:16
Vox seem cleaner. Before, I couldn't understand every word. now they cut through the mix.
I feel the sections where the kick comes in, there's a lack of impact. especially at 2:09
just personal taste here but I would try arranging it to so that the synths disappear just before, so as to add dynamics.
Also, remember that sample selection is far more important than eq'ing sounds to death. So choose wisely!
...and add a mixable outro! DJ's will appreciate it! :)
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Edited by - DJ_FunDaBounce on 2024/05/20 22:23:53 |
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