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squarepeg
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Posted - 2020/01/19 : 02:48:31
https://soundcloud.com/andypottsmusic/test Any feedback on the above? Looking for feedback on the over all sound/arrangement/composition etc. Was messing about with 'Scott Brownish' melodies and progressed into this. Still working on getting overall production standards up to speed but any feedback is appreciated. Cheers.
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LeVzi
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Posted - 2020/01/19 : 09:58:03
In terms of the stuff you are looking for feedback on, it all seems decent enough.
But there are a lot of general mix issues with it. Which you probably are aware of.
It definitely sounds Bruuun (ish)
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squarepeg
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Posted - 2020/01/23 : 23:13:55
quote: Originally posted by LeVzi:
In terms of the stuff you are looking for feedback on, it all seems decent enough.
But there are a lot of general mix issues with it. Which you probably are aware of.
It definitely sounds Bruuun (ish)
Thanks mate. What particularly in the mix should I be concerned about? I'm aware of the glaringly obvious issues (levels etc), but just looking for some pointers. I'm a bit fresh when it comes to this shit after a bit of a break so any fb appreciated.
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Si Thompson
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Posted - 2020/01/29 : 12:49:13
quote: Originally posted by squarepeg:
quote: Originally posted by LeVzi:
In terms of the stuff you are looking for feedback on, it all seems decent enough.
But there are a lot of general mix issues with it. Which you probably are aware of.
It definitely sounds Bruuun (ish)
Thanks mate. What particularly in the mix should I be concerned about? I'm aware of the glaringly obvious issues (levels etc), but just looking for some pointers. I'm a bit fresh when it comes to this shit after a bit of a break so any fb appreciated.
I like what you have going on here. My sort of UK Hardcore.
Leads are a little harsh and could do with more EQ to take out some of the high frequencies. Also, I would add some fills like snare rolls, risers, crashes, white noise on breakdowns, just so things transition better and the track sounds more full. The rap sample could do with some reverb and delay, sounds a little dry.
This track has potential and I would like to hear the finished article. Respect!
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thedjjudah
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Posted - 2020/02/02 : 23:10:54
I like the rap sample and the breakbeat at the beginning. I also like the space between the kick and the bass. Makes it sound real Kurt-like. I'm not really fond of the bass progression and melody after that, but the breakdown and main melody sound pretty nice to me.
I can definitely feel the Scott Brown influence in the chorus.
Overall, there are some parts I don't like but a lot that I do. Keep working at it, my friend.
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squarepeg
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Posted - 2020/02/22 : 01:04:32
Thanks for the feedback to those who did...
Yeah this was a pretty rough tune, and I just found out the file corrupted so it is no more! But I'll crack on with the Scotia rip off!
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Si Thompson
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Posted - 2020/02/22 : 14:21:45
quote: Originally posted by squarepeg:
Thanks for the feedback to those who did...
Yeah this was a pretty rough tune, and I just found out the file corrupted so it is no more! But I'll crack on with the Scotia rip off!
Unlucky. I liked it. Have you not got a previous version of the file that you can access?
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squarepeg
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Posted - 2020/02/23 : 01:37:02
No mate! Pitfalls of getting back into it - not saving enough backups!
But aye, glad to hear you liked it man - ps. I PM'ed you :)
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Si Thompson
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Posted - 2020/02/23 : 14:56:26
quote: Originally posted by squarepeg:
No mate! Pitfalls of getting back into it - not saving enough backups!
But aye, glad to hear you liked it man - ps. I PM'ed you :)
You sure? Nothing from you in my inbox.
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