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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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 Posted - 2010/05/11 : 21:40:11
http://soundcloud.com/lorenzo-tweakn/lorenzo-tweakn-nos-320kps-unmastered
theres the soundcloud link. cheers!
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2010/05/11 : 23:33:40
What people need to remember here is that this time last year, Lorenzo was a tone deaf wannabe musician looking for love in all the wrong elementary schools.
This is a stark contrast and its one you should be proud of. Everything thing sounds well timed and well written, I love the happy melody and the feeling behind it. Kesean has clearly taught you allot!
However, there are still some points that need attention. The Filters have some mistakes in and transistion's from one stage to another are a bit sudden. Sweeps and crashes wouldn't go a miss. Also, there's not allot of power behind the kick or bass, so the sound effects are more present, which is slightly backward.
But given how much youve improved, its very impressive.
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catlikethief
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Posted - 2010/05/12 : 01:47:24
Definitely the best thing you've done yet.
The interesting percussion in the intro is great stuff, it's nice to hear people take their intros & outros more seriously than Darren Styles who thinks a kick for 16 bars and then a kick and bass for 16 bars are interesting to listen to.
Also it's well written, could use a big boost in the whole bottom end though... some studio monitors would definitely cure that.
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2010/05/12 : 14:09:07
thanks for the feedback guys!
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choonland
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Posted - 2010/05/15 : 02:30:04
yeah agreed, well done man
I like the intro a lot too
some notes in the main melody feel a little random imo
other than that is pretty nice
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2010/05/15 : 02:35:20
quote:
Originally posted by choonland:
yeah agreed, well done man
I like the intro a lot too
some notes in the main melody feel a little random imo
other than that is pretty nice
Cheers!
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