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roundhead711
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 Posted - 2010/02/18 : 22:03:58
http://www.mediafire.com/?jmjtlgwgiig
Feedback please...... :)
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Edited by - Triquatra on 2010/02/19 12:23:39 |
choonland
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Posted - 2010/02/18 : 23:50:18
a little advice, try to upload your track in places like 4shared, soundcloud, myspace, or any place that let you listen without having to download the file...
most people wont download because they are too lazy ;)
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roundhead711
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Posted - 2010/02/19 : 00:06:23
ok fair enuf ha.
But did you download it?
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choonland
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Posted - 2010/02/19 : 00:07:21
since im iddle now, i downloaded it :P
not bad mate. breakdown feels somewhat empty, maybe some FXs, and a " bigger" pad?
melody is good, but when it hits (2:40), it could have more energy, the volume of the synth is rather low, and you could layer other synth to fill the space more.
levels need some work, for example the middle range of the bass is kind of loud.
all in all is not bad, but is a little too long for my taste.
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roundhead711
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Posted - 2010/02/19 : 00:12:25
Thanks mate really quite chuffed with that.
I need a pair of monitors... im workin on standard pc speakers so its hard to judge.
Its only the second time ive worked with vocals too.
thanks anyway appreciate it.
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scottyd2k9
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Posted - 2010/02/19 : 03:01:47
I liked it alot but from 1.40 - 2.15 it sounded a bit empty and a bit low, maybe a louder synth or something else there like a loop or an FX would be good but apart from that i think it sounds good, the longer the better also..
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2010/02/19 : 08:55:29
Sounds like you're only using the one layer for your lead and bass, they are very thin! Experiment with beefing these up adding different layers on different octaves. You will need to do some EQing to stop the layers from clashing too.
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