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ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/06/14 : 23:17:59
tell me what u think
http://www.4shared.com/file/111831713/3f5156df/hardcore_till_i_die_dj_ozmium_remix.html
just dont be 2 harsh
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Edited by - ozmium on 2009/06/14 23:21:08 |
ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/06/14 : 23:25:45
Bump*
naturatech helped me out with it
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tru bass
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Posted - 2009/06/14 : 23:43:08
not really much to it is there... lead was a bit abrasive when it came in, sounds like a preset.
basically, just watch tutorials on layering and stuff like that
im not keen on that sort of hardcore, it reminds me of jumpstyle.
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 01:38:04
bit unfair to call out feedback harsh.. we just tell it how we hear it. would you prefer us not to tell u and let you go on making bad music?
this tunes ok... not allot to it.. again the bass is too faint, the kick needs a snare on it from the start really, and the track has so few layers, it's barely a step up from midi.. and dont bring in a new open hat 3 minutes in. bit random so near the end of the song.
its a solid track though, just keep trying. like i said, perhaps compare your music to released labelised hardcore and compare them. dont release the track until your sure its good enough. use msn contacts or other hardcore producers as reference. yeah?
and no need for bumping after 15 minutes! allow time for us to download, listen, and type! bump after like 2 days...
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 01:52:17
so its better than the others??
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 02:14:23
kick is weak. sounds generic. jus keep working on making musik. possibly take more time on stuff n try to make it best as possible before posting unless its a preview
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 09:17:42
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Originally posted by Lorenzo.Tweakn:
kick is weak. sounds generic. jus keep working on making musik. possibly take more time on stuff n try to make it best as possible before posting unless its a preview
What he said.
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Meathead
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 12:15:33
10 minutes and then bump? Was there any need really?
I agree with what's been said. People seem too quick to throw up a track for feedback, i'd like to give feedback but if youre at the stage where you cant even hear what's wrong with a tune i feel unable to help you. Just keep practicin and take your time to put a tune together. It sounds like youve got the midi used nothing but presets to play it, then slapped a kick and other bits of percussion on it. Youre going to have to work a bit harder than that im afraid mate.
I know that's harsh and im sorry for that but feedback is all about what you NEED to hear not what you WANT to hear. Good luck mate, keep at it.
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 13:30:14
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Originally posted by Meathead:
10 minutes and then bump? Was there any need really?
I agree with what's been said. People seem too quick to throw up a track for feedback.
Yeah, I spend weeks on a track before I release it since I want ti to be as good as possible. if the slightest thing is wrong I go back and render it again with the corrections. Colourflaire was rendered about 30 times alone.. Upon a Green Hill still isn't finished and thats been rendered about 100 times.. If your a slow learner I guess, it pays to spend time exploring the different areas and getting a track to sound as real as possible.
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Project-Industrial
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 13:58:23
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Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
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Originally posted by Meathead:
10 minutes and then bump? Was there any need really?
I agree with what's been said. People seem too quick to throw up a track for feedback.
Yeah, I spend weeks on a track before I release it since I want ti to be as good as possible. if the slightest thing is wrong I go back and render it again with the corrections. Colourflaire was rendered about 30 times alone.. Upon a Green Hill still isn't finished and thats been rendered about 100 times.. If your a slow learner I guess, it pays to spend time exploring the different areas and getting a track to sound as real as possible.
dont overkill tho =p haha
anyway ontopic.. dont bump that fast at first.. ppl need to ave time to take a close listen ;)
been said kick is weak? no i dont think so.. its fine but it needs something more to it.. a snare over it (also said already here). the lead is repetive and isnt filling up.. also ur percussion (hats/claps) are a bit the straightend.. loosen them up.. play around wif them dont follow the tight 4/4 8/8 method and just mess around wif them.. ofc ur just a beginner so take these feedbacks not as harsh but as wise advices ;) feedback == harsh... no way to change that :)
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HardcoreHarryUK
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Posted - 2009/06/15 : 14:05:24
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Originally posted by Project-Industrial:
quote:
Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
quote:
Originally posted by Meathead:
10 minutes and then bump? Was there any need really?
I agree with what's been said. People seem too quick to throw up a track for feedback.
Yeah, I spend weeks on a track before I release it since I want ti to be as good as possible. if the slightest thing is wrong I go back and render it again with the corrections. Colourflaire was rendered about 30 times alone.. Upon a Green Hill still isn't finished and thats been rendered about 100 times.. If your a slow learner I guess, it pays to spend time exploring the different areas and getting a track to sound as real as possible.
dont overkill tho =p haha
anyway ontopic.. dont bump that fast at first.. ppl need to ave time to take a close listen ;)
been said kick is weak? no i dont think so.. its fine but it needs something more to it.. a snare over it (also said already here). the lead is repetive and isnt filling up.. also ur percussion (hats/claps) are a bit the straightend.. loosen them up.. play around wif them dont follow the tight 4/4 8/8 method and just mess around wif them.. ofc ur just a beginner so take these feedbacks not as harsh but as wise advices ;) feedback == harsh... no way to change that :)
ref all of the above.. and if you are just starting out.. what i use to do is each new track i made would be me trying to learn a new particular technique.
for example the first ever tune i EVER made was me discovering the off beat one note bassline (simple yes.. but a discovery in producing terms non the less)
the moving to the techno'y every 2 beats high hats..
through to large basslines (ala - speed garage)
through the sampling old tunes and ****in with them..
through to eq'ing elements in and out..
etc etc (you get my drift)
then when you have covered loads of these areas you can try and bring them all together.. and actually produce stuff that is original to you..
If i hear something i think thats cool.. i think 'how would i do that'.. how would i make it sound!
hope that helps..
easy
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