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DJ-Pure
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 Posted - 2007/05/24 : 16:38:29
Well now im slowly grasping Hardcore i think I've come up with something worthy enough to post (and not waste you're time like before) hehe.
It's a remix of an old Genie tune some of you might have heard, i know of the obvious issues and that the break down is a bit sporadic but that's to stop little punk's half inching it, The Melodie isn't at it's full potential either but still it's so people can recognized the finished from any stolen one (if it happens) Also the Vocals are missing so it doesn't make sence kind of.
Give me some good feedback, feedback i can work with not just general stabbing away.
http://www.speedyshare.com/949445999.html
Cheers, Pure.
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Posted - 2007/05/25 : 00:17:34
After taking into consideration what you've already said about it and that when it comes out of the main break
it gives the impression of being too quiet, probably because the stabby synth is too loud just before it all kicks back in,
I'd say that it's pretty impressive.
P.S.
imo you should have posted this in 'Music discussion - hardcore'
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Posted - 2007/05/25 : 13:02:29
Wicked stuff thanks mate, i'll be updating the link soon.
36 people opened this page and couldn't be fu*ked to add anything.
Thought it would be eazier to re post in this post, Updated
http://www.speedyshare.com/916294935.html (Cut version so you whores cant nick it) :p
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Posted - 2007/05/25 : 21:40:03
Nice! Not much else to say that hasn't already been said, except nice job on getting the mixdown to sound proffessional. And there's a brief period where there's a little 1 note pulse between the main lead, but they use the same sound. You might want to change that up a little bit, because they clash for that brief period. Overall, sweet tune.
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Posted - 2007/05/26 : 10:48:58
Thanks very much, editing it is a bit tricky given the Computer im working on, theirs not enough CPU to do it fast and effective but i'll transport it to my bugger P.C sort it all out and put up a final version MABY lol
Cheers for the feedback guys. btw does it sound R.B.C'ish? the riff that is..
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Posted - 2007/05/26 : 22:11:57
Sounds very good mate, very professional. I'd like to hear a good acid line in there though just to give it that extra little umpf. All in all I'm suprised at how good it was 
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Posted - 2007/05/26 : 23:25:08
O.K last one, this is all tweaks completed, times fixed ect.
http://www.speedyshare.com/127457853.html
This is not the final Version.
I'm going to add more.
Feedback would be good.
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Posted - 2007/05/27 : 05:05:50
I like the new version, but you've also added in some major no-no's, like when there's the huge fade out into silence before the breakdown (which completely destroys the flow) and earlier when there's a really long, overextended sound of the synth line being slowed, pitched, and filtered (which also ruined the flow). Kudos on fixing the part where the backing and the lead clashed, but you kind of made that one a little odd by overemphasizing the backing section, making the star of the show (the lead) sit pretty low in the mix. And near the end, there's a synth deal that's spitting out a stream of 16th notes, which really only works with a 303 (though your filter work on that line was excellent, but as they say, you can't polish a turd).
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Posted - 2007/05/27 : 13:12:33
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Originally posted by Pope C XXIII:
I like the new version, but you've also added in some major no-no's, like when there's the huge fade out into silence before the breakdown (which completely destroys the flow) and earlier when there's a really long, overextended sound of the synth line being slowed, pitched, and filtered (which also ruined the flow). Kudos on fixing the part where the backing and the lead clashed, but you kind of made that one a little odd by overemphasizing the backing section, making the star of the show (the lead) sit pretty low in the mix. And near the end, there's a synth deal that's spitting out a stream of 16th notes, which really only works with a 303 (though your filter work on that line was excellent, but as they say, you can't polish a turd).
I understand what you're saying, and thanks alot for the feedback i can work with this.
The reasons for the long silence was for vocals, but i cant find anything good enough to put in there, like a speech or something like that.
I'll work on it more today and i might add in a hole new section to it, maby a DnB area or something like :D
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Posted - 2007/05/29 : 12:42:08
Yep. Once again, what the Pope said.
It's worth sorting out 'cos it's good.
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